I’ve gotten some critiques on chapters 1-3 of the Isabelle story, and I just posted 4-6. I plan to wait and edit after I get critiques on the whole thing, so I can prioritize changes — and because I’d like to compare overall edits with the as-you-go edits and find the happy solution.

Also, I’ve learned that Word does some infuriating things if you double-space a 40+ page document. Very, very annoying.